I really like this! It seems quite haunting, I think that's due to the black and white, and the fading of the staircase into darkness. It's also a really interesting viewpoint.
Firstly let me state that I am in no way a photographer. I can only tell you what I don't see and want to see, not how to accomplish it. My apologies for that.
Focal Point for Me: The circle post in the ceiling. If thats wrong, or if you didn't have one at all, something to consider.
I think the black and white option was bold, but it's too dark I feel. It doesn't leave me feeling anything one way or another, and isn't art supposed to inspire emotion of some kind?
I do like the framing, and the subject. A good eye on that and I'd defiantly love to see more done with the subject.
Focal Point for Me:
The circle post in the ceiling. If thats wrong, or if you didn't have one at all, something to consider.
I think the black and white option was bold, but it's too dark I feel. It doesn't leave me feeling anything one way or another, and isn't art supposed to inspire emotion of some kind?
I do like the framing, and the subject. A good eye on that and I'd defiantly love to see more done with the subject.
Unfortunately the DA logo does draw focus, but it is needed.
I really like the shadow in the bottom left hand side, awesome work!